Sunday, November 14, 2010

Homeroom Reform Essay Final Draft

“Can someone please help me?” Sarah asks, but the teachers are too busy to notice that she is having trouble. In most classes my school has a T.A., which I think is a very helpful aspect to most of their learning. San Pasqual Academy, is a great High School, but their aren’t enough teachers per class to help each student as needed. San Pasqual is a group home for kids that have been mistreated throughout their life.San Pasqual has over 135 students, and not every teacher can be available for all of their needs. San Pasqual’s students deserve to have an education that they can use throughout their lifetime. San Pasqual has very intelligent students, but not all get the help that they need.

UROK is a class, that helps with the students education. UROK will spend the money to buy new computers for reading, and to buy Cd's so that the students will be able to listen to the story. This class needs funding because most students are visual or listening learner’s, which means that they need to hear or see what they are learning about. I know that the teachers will spend the money for the benefit of the kids more than themselves.

Funding UROK will help me by increasing my learning abilities, and my ways of focusing. This will help me by motivating me to improve my grades, and reaching my goals of going to college. This prize will also help me by getting the supplies and attention that I need to succeed. If UROK were to get the money, the students will be very thankful and appreciative to the donors.

If my school received the money, the students and staff should all write thank you letters to show how much we appreciate the supplies.I have helped by requesting new supplies and books to improve the students learning. I have also helped by proving, that I am capable of maintaining my grades, and by using good listening skills. We could really use the money to increase our learning abilities.

If we receive the money, we will be overjoyed and you will see the impact it has on us because of our grades.This project will reflect on our lives and the way we live for our education. Another way the project will help the us, is because it will show the students how important their education is to them and their family.This project will help not only the students, but the staff as well.

We need the money because education is the most important thing in our lives.

My school should earn the money for more help with their work, attention in class, their motivation to continue and not give up, and for more supplies for school. I believe that San Pasqual Academy deserves to win this project and prize for our school, because it will help us out more than anything.

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