Tuesday, January 18, 2011

“Animal Farm” Revolution at SPA

One day, Elizabeth was walking to school and all of a sudden students from left to right were running around acting immature. When she asked one of her friends, Alyssa, what was going on. Her friend told her everyone was rebelling against the school and was going crazy. This was a shock to Elizabeth, because she thought the staff would’ve stopped these children by now. But as she turned the corner, exiting from the girls rec, it seemed like the whole campus was non compliant. There was food being thrown at staff, fights everywhere, and kids running off with SPA property such as keys.
Then, one of the students named Dustin stopped to talk to her. “What in the world is going on here?” Elizabeth asked, “Why is everybody acting like this?”. Dustin answered sadly, “You didn’t hear?”. She shook her head. “They were planning on making this place into a lock down facility since all the kids were bringing drugs onto the campus” he answered. This infuriated Elizabeth but she heard sirens so she wasn’t trying to get involved in the whole mess.
In the end, the whole campus was ruined and all the staff didn’t know what to do. Cars, t.v.’s, and computers were stolen. Even furniture was thrown all over the place, it was surreal. Staff and students were crying and injured, but most of the kids were gone. The police finally arrested more than half of the campus and everyone had to leave the premises. The scene was pretty sad, but in the end there was no point to it because nobody won in the end.

4 comments:

  1. Great job on your paragraph! Sometimes I think some people would actually do that.

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  2. I love this story you did a good job. Good Job Elizabeth.

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  3. Way to go, Elizabeth! This is a well-written, third-person narrated paragraph!

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  4. I agree with Amy, this is an outstanding narrative.

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